this could be a nice shot... but the weird vignette you on the top ruins the exposure... sure it's artsy and people will love you for it, but you totally threw off any tonal balance you may have had. the curtain on the right is also throwing off the composition... and it's distracting as hell. you're an amazing photographer... i've seen you do better than this... which is why it's hard to understand why you would submit something like this.
Haa
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Maybe She Was In His Blood Forever:
Wonderful colors.